glass flowers

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    • quise
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    about my ex but still friend

    glass flowers

    glass flowers like love are fragile,delicate,yet still beautiful
    many people see glass flower but few know their meanings
    in my love story their are six meaning one for each color
    communication,friendship,trust,caring,reliability,and love

    GREEN(communication)
    it started with a simple hello and from her smile i can tell she was special
    her smile was beautiful even threw the braces as she said hey
    forgetting our first conversation will never happen still makes me happy today
    your beauty was magnificent and yet we were so young as we walked to the store in some place unkown
    i noticed a green glass flower on the ground below us so i picked it up  you ran and said it was stealing
    as you laughed and smiled after running i gave you this green glass flower as we laughed and shared our first kiss

    BLUE(friendship)
    you were this super human you were older then me but you cared as much as i did about it
    you are a special person in my life you made me forget my heart pain from a girlfriend from my past
    you did it all from, helping me with my homework to keeping me from the poliece and i will always love you for that
    "look at what i got for you" i said as i pulled the blue glass rose out of my backpack "and dont worry i didnt steal it this time"
    that was the first time we told eachother we loved eachother hiding from the cops nut it wouldnt be the last

    YELLOW(trust)
    i remember when my mom was at work and the house i was at got the door kicked in by the poliece
    you let me stay at your house i never told you this but thank you for being there for me
    you were the only one who knew what was going on in my life
     i trust you with my life baby
    we werent even suppose to be at your home your dad wouldve sent you to an all girls school if he ever seen you with me again
     but you could care less and as you walked into your class the next day a yellow glass rose was sitting on your desk with a note that said i didnt steal this one either love always

    PINK(caring)
    it has been a while since i seen you
    you moved to a different school but as you run to me screaming my name and hug me i can hear your heart crying out for me
    and all i can think of is my ex
    as i talk to you about my ex and my love for her you tell me you understand but you will always be here for me
    as i walk away i say "i have something for you" as i hand you a pink glass rose and tell you your always in my heart

    CLEAR/GOLD TRIM(reliability)
    i have came to the realization that my past girl friend will never grow up and move on so we can have a future i come back to you 
    you welcome me back with open arms as i wonder why does she stay
    my family loves you and my sister cherishes you
    how could i love my past girlfriend so much
    but love is blind i guess 
    even though you are a grown women now living alone you always welcome me back into your heart and home you will never turn your back on me
    as im leaving your house one day i notice your glass vase of glass roses in it
    so as i leave i slip a clear glass rose with gold trim in the vase

    RED ROSE(love)
    my love for you has grown stronger even though my past girlfriend is still in my heart
    i go crazy when im not with her but you help me forget about her but you can never take her place 
    i try to look over it and give you my love rose that come with a ring promising you,you will be mine until the end and we will be together forever
    as we sit at your home all day you finally walk away where i can take out the beautiful red glass rose
    as i walk the rose to you i say i love you but call you the name of my past lover
    you look me in my eye as you walk over and say baby are you in love with me or her
    as i tell you my answer i drop the rose of love and it breaks on the tile

                                   - gods son

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    Aphrena commented on glass flowers

    07-08-2009

    no offence but i cant believe this came out of one so young. this is absolutely beautiful my heart dropped at the end.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

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