*~Giving Up On Loving You~*

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    *~Giving Up On Loving You~*

    I'm giving up you
    I can't stand all the pain you put me through
    although I know, my feelings are still there.
    Maybe I'll find someone else who would actually care
    Too many times have I said," I Love You"
    Now my goal is to find someone new
    If you love me too, please let me know
    Because I want our love, to start to grow
    If you dont, just set me free
    I dont want anything else that has to do with you and me
    You may think we should still be friends
    But to me, I think everything about the both of us should just end
    To continue, then I will find myself falling back in love with you
    That very day your were with that new girl
    I felt as if, to my life was no world
    I ran back home, closed the door
    Took my pills, and fell to the floor
    You didn't know, you never knew
    Untill someone gave a letter from me to you
    In the letter, I said my three words
    Knowing that it'll be the last time being heard
    Tears rushed down your soft, sweet face
    Your heart began to race and race
    You ran to my room, opened the door
    Found me laying there, breathing no more
    Close to me was a dove
    And next to it said," I Died For Love"
    Your held me so close to your side
    I let my last tear go, and you started to cry
    You slowly said you loved me too
    But there was nothing you can do
    You looked up into the sky, and told God above,
    "That you will also die for love"
    Your carried me up and laid me down to bed
    Took the pills with no other words said
    On top of you, was a short letter,
    "Please Bury Us Togather."

     

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    DirtyLilSecret commented on *~Giving Up On Loving You~*

    06-01-2009

    This is an awesome peom and it speaks to me.. I was going through the same thing not to long ago! Im so happy that you could get what you were lookingfor and you seem to be able to express something that i couldnt.. Xoxox.. ditrylilsecret

    4everboom commented on *~Giving Up On Loving You~*

    05-25-2009

    I really this you do have talent, I agree with tami I hope that you have solve you problem and you have found what you were looking for or let go that which was holding you back . great piece.

    TamiG76 commented on *~Giving Up On Loving You~*

    05-21-2009

    If I could see through these freaking tears I might actually get a review going!! WOW!!!! That was AMAZING!!! I'm not going to ask about the inspiration for this. I am simply going to say that I have rarely found anyone who has your kind of talent. I look forward to reading a lot more of your poems.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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