Girls never do what they say

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My very first poem hope you like it so here it is:

Girls never do what they say

When we first met he said
"I'll make you fall in love with me 
and run away from you".
I believed him and laughed
"I'll never fall in love with you."

 
We became friends he said
"I like you and I wanna be with you"
 I didn't believe him
 but my stupid heart did!

 
One day he said
"You looked like a princess, my princess"
 I didn't believe him
 but my stupid heart did!

 
He called me and he said
"I missed your voice"
I didn't believe him
but my stupid heart did!

 
In his texts he said
"I Love you"
I didn't believe him
but my stupid heart did!

 
When we first met he said
"I'll make you fall in love with me 
and run away from you".
I believed him and laughed
"I'll never fall in love with you."

 
He did what he said but I, I was a girl and 
girls never do what they say
 

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Shay86 commented on Girls never do what they say

01-23-2012

Very good poem. I love this. It show how emotionally attached a woman can get without them knowing. Hope to see more.

dawn7191 commented on Girls never do what they say

12-27-2011

I like your poem. I've been there and done that. The heart loves what it loves unfortunaly.

namo5

01/03/2012

yes it does! ... thank you :)

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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