Gina

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  • Passion

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    I have never taken a formal class on writing poetry. I could use any pointers that anyone would like to give. This poem was inspired by a close personal friend.
    E./Topper
    June 7,2009

    Gina

     Unfaltering, faithful, honest, obedient, perceptive, Optimistic, and proud
    These are the gifts received in her unconditional Love
    Now I am bound to this skipping of my heart,
    The irregular, beautiful beating rhythm playing Throughout my veins
    My blood flows pure
    My pulse strengthens when she is near
    For my love for her is strong and sincere
    Forever with my lady is my destiny 
    A home in her heart I found to be
    Her passion is her gift 
    It contains truth that fill my spirits on high
    Her devotion saves my life
    Always there,
    With every trouble,
    She comes to my rescue
    Steadfast and encouraging
    With her,
    I make it through
    I think, I realize, 
    Life without her,
    Would be;
    Less than
    BY: Topper
    June Twenty-eighth
    Two Thousand-Eight

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    GURL commented on Gina

    06-07-2009

    I TRULY LIKE THOS POEM IT MAKES ME THINK OF MY MOM...AND THE MOTHER I WANT TO BE TO MY SON...GREAT READ POET..GURL
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    topper

    06/07/2009

    The person this was written about would trully appreciate you said that...thank you. She is a great person and the love of my life.

    robear commented on Gina

    06-07-2009

    Vert deep emotion and pain. I like the way the love is refered to as rescue and hope. Encouraging to believe that another could make such a big difference in ones life and leave them incomplete or unfullfilled without
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    Griff commented on Gina

    06-07-2009

    I liked it, some very good lines "my pulse strengthens when she is near" , "her devotion saves my life".. powerful. Personally I prefer poetry that rhymes, but that doesn't mean I can't appreciate and see the talent.. I think you should continue to write and share your work :)
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    DragonAngel commented on Gina

    06-07-2009

    this is a good one not much rhyming but none the less a keeper great job i have to give this one a 9 for the overall wordingand grace used in this work
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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