Frozen Lakes and Dark Clouds

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    Frozen Lakes and Dark Clouds

     frozen lakes and dark clouds haunt all furry beasts
    as they
    crunch branches under their heavy paws
    set all four down and smell the air
    tonight
    they'll all move slowly
    as if a black cumulus might fall
    suddenly
    suspect are those starting fires
    cleaning cookware

    frozen lakes and dark clouds
    startle the wisest and noble of owls
    "whooooo"
    and fly off into the moon
    purple and full
    crickets line up to make thier chirps
    and the chill
    stills the already iced water

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    Rhymer commented on Frozen Lakes and Dark Clouds

    10-02-2010

    Interesting read, about the winter approaching and its effects on the animals. Nice piece.
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    czg123

    10/03/2010

    thank you so much!

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

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