Freedom Dance (dedicated to my friend Billie)

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Freedom Dance (dedicated to my friend Billie)

....You my love who beats in my chest so brave and loud. Who screams of freedom and love for all things. Yet I only choose to hear your visions in tiny threads...You are the one who begs me to dance wildly in the moonlit desert sand while you promise to hum your sweet tunes..You my love have the courage to see me dancing in the desert to see beads of sweat pour out of me until i turned to water. “Oh my sweet love” I always cry back, give me courage that goes beyond what i see in front of me today, for your courage my love will carry me away, high high above the bonds of this day. 
Your courage my sweet- heart- gives me wings for which to soar around the world in order to find comfort for my soul. The desert heat so hot the salty sweat burns my lips and tongue, I swirl wildly in my cowboy hat dancing in the hot desert sun..I have bliss in my heart....
You free me again through my dreams and with sweat pouring and dancing free, you plunge me into the cool Aegean sea...and again you fill me with bliss....You show me the depths of the Sea, you dare me to stay i inhale the foaming sea and you, the goddess of love and lust, Aphrodite is there for me to see ...The salty water burns my tongue and lips, while Aphrodite’s glare holds all of me..The perfect form of a woman, she reaches through the sea to touch my salty lips.. she moves closer to me as i hear her evil hiss....You my love my heart are again in total bliss..Aphrodite’s lips caress my face and she finds my lips, so sweet her lips do taste deep below the salty sea...and for an instant , i see you mylove, through my sweet tender heart, this body these bones that we carry are not enough they are merely a mask..this body in that blink of an eye,didnt even feel that it was mine. The only thing that felt truly to be me was my one and only love, my heart..I saw her dancing in that instant dancing wildly on a cloud with her friend,the sun....

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BigDaddyCash commented on Freedom Dance (dedicated to my friend Billie)

11-18-2009

I congratulate you on the freedom you have with words your imagery is remarkable and the plot is superb. My favorite subject is fantasy love and you are boldly right on target. Your heart beats with fervor in the tremor of imagination dancing in the harmony of a romantic equation. I can feel the emotion and self worship in your rhapsody of words. Thank you for sharing. LOL, BDC

ripster100

11/20/2009

Thank you for reading and rating my poem, the poem was written in a swell of emotion. Im thankful that you enjoyed it.

icu2 commented on Freedom Dance (dedicated to my friend Billie)

11-14-2009

This is amazing! A very bold fantasy of love, lust, and sweat. My favorite part is when he twirls around in the sun in his cowboy hat. Was his love cheating on him in the end...when she was dancing with the sun?

ripster100

11/15/2009

Thank you for rating my poem. She(my heart) was dancing with the sun because she likes to be warm

icu2

11/16/2009

Nice..........I like that.

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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