Four Minutes Outside Denver

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    Four Minutes Outside Denver

    Four minutes outside Denver
    I'm a mile high and driving fast
    The only thing on my mind
    Is the one I loved last

    The clock is getting blurry
    I roll the window down
    Felt the cold air touch my face
    I remember hearing the sound

    Our eyes were blazing white
    And didn't stop even though
    The cost would be my life
    'Cause I'd already lost my soul

    The clock was in a hurry
    I tried to slow it down
    Felt the heat touch my face
    I remember hearing the sound

    It's her tears that haunt me
    But it's my tears that bend the light
    I'd give anything to change this ending
    But I lost the price tonight

    Four minutes outside Denver
    I'm a mile high and wandering lost
    The only thing on my mind
    Is the one I loved and lost

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    melki18 commented on Four Minutes Outside Denver

    10-02-2009

    Wow this poem is amazing, it's deep and sad and expressing love you felt for someone. I love it and its a great read. Great job. =]

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