FOREVER YOURS

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    FOREVER YOURS


    Something just doesn't
    make any sence to me..

    is it ur personality???
    is it just the way u r???


    the way u say things to me..
    it makes me relise..

    me and u r the only people
    that make sence to eachother

    no one understands
    u and me

    so no mater what im forever yours :D

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    Chaos128 commented on FOREVER YOURS

    11-09-2010

    Did you sign anything? Forever's a long time ha ha Never mind me, AlBaNi98, I'm just jealous because I have all the warmth and compassionof a gila monster. Very affecting verse. I do gotta agree with ShadowStealer, though. The spelling does smudge the shine a bit.
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    ShadowStealer commented on FOREVER YOURS

    10-12-2010

    The spelling could have been a little better, but nonetheless a very poetic write. Wonderful! ShadowStealer
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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