Foreplay

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    Foreplay

    Bemused with you; a jolt of oxytocin courses through my anatomy and whose to blame after all, I'm not ectothermic just a prosaic woman.

    Causing my skin to glow, my eyes to sparkle, all seems Pristine and blithe in the world.

    Vasopressin, heart flutters.
    Excite, delight and frighten me.

    Pondering: "How could you loose control; why is this happening"; I'm embarrassed at my new found zest.

    What is the world going to think... "Oh, there goes another one who lost her sense of sanity & wisdom over her impetuous emotions"; how tragic.

    I pray for this sensation to go away, you touch my corpus lutem and I'm left in this nugatory state with a glimmer of hope that Progesterone doesn't rush in and homeostasis returns.

    Alas, to behold my veneration; you must posses sagacity and comprehend quintessential pulchritude.

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    Jedi4Jesus commented on Foreplay

    07-09-2009

    Amazingly written to stimulate the mind to definitive thinking!! I think I just spent a few minutes in an Anatomical pharmaceutical class. Thanks for the lesson!!

    Nirlepa222

    07/09/2009

    Glad you liked it... Do you have something similar?

    Romano commented on Foreplay

    06-22-2009

    nice, just to see the vocabulary of an educated one reach heights of others who have no clue as to what they mean or fathom the thought of being able to subdue a lauguage so high, intimidating to most but very beautiful

    Nirlepa222

    07/09/2009

    Mahalo, do you have something similar?

    rbatr19 commented on Foreplay

    04-09-2009

    Lol! HuH? I thought the same thing one time! Great turn around what I expected.

    Nirlepa222

    07/09/2009

    Aloha! I never check this site... do you have something similar

    Plot121 commented on Foreplay

    11-20-2008

    Your vocabulary out streches mine considerably not saying its bad but I found most of the words hard to grasp with out a dictionary. I read the emotion in it and loved most of the visuals but would like to be able to wrap my mind around the whole tho

    Nirlepa222

    07/09/2009

    Aloha! I never check this site... Mahalo

    Vincent commented on Foreplay

    10-31-2008

    I'm taking the time to write this comment once agian to say your a beutiful woman, and that i enjoyed your poem. I did not want any confusion with that sorry i d part that was a mistakenly written. thanks

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    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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