football

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football

the rush, the thrill
thats what i feel
when i step on that turf
i feel like a part of the earth
solid, strong,a bolder a log
running trying to see through the fog
in a forest of helmets and pads
the quarterback is my goal im starting to get mad
i run faster seeing the end of the window
hurry up he is about to throw
Im furious i can see him
confodent, fast, knowing he will win
im right next to him he didnt throw the ball
he couldnt see i was to tall
wrap up helmet down
make him hurt, he hits the grownd
thats only one play
i run through that forest a hundred times a day

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lindabrito commented on football

09-16-2009

Dear huggybear, I really liked your poem, I think it is great for a person your age to get into poetry. I am 54 and just starting out. So you are way ahead of me keep up the good work. Linda

huggybearpoet

09/16/2009

thank you i dont have that much time to type them all out so one at a time for now i have notebooks full

lunamarie commented on football

09-16-2009

Dear huggybear, I liked it ... even though I am very girly and not good at football ... congrats on your first poem ... Luna

huggybearpoet

09/16/2009

thank you i have many diferent ones i have more to come

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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