Foolish Dreamer

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    Foolish Dreamer

    She was just another girl, just like any ordiary

    girl, but she had one problem...

    she had her head up in the clouds,

    dreaming all day. Each and everyday.

    Hope filled the pieces of her broken heart

    and she becomes a dreamer...a foolish dreamer.

    The dreaming wasn't wrong, but the dreams were

    somewhat impossible. She dreams that one day he will

    return to her. She dreams that he still loves her the

    way she loves him. She dreams that he still wants her

    that way she wants him. She dreams of the

    impossible...

    Will she never learn?

    Will it never hit her?

    Will she be forever

    ...a foolish dreamer

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    Zep commented on Foolish Dreamer

    01-21-2010

    You need to correct the spelling in the first line "ordinary" and a larger font size would make it easier to read also. But, I love the idea, though not unique, you've worded this poem eloquently. Thanks for sharing! Enjoyable read! Zep

    lilvicki commented on Foolish Dreamer

    01-11-2010

    I can say I really really like this poem, it is funny how sometimes life can bring us to such things.....Nice very nice!!

    KyrsCruz

    01/12/2010

    thank you!

    mikael commented on Foolish Dreamer

    08-27-2009

    I like your poems, they don't fit the norm, but yet they are cliche, I think that is the word I;m looking for, any way, I likes, I used to live in grand prairie, you should be good @ poetry, that's all texas has to ofer, great creativity.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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