Foggy Daze

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Foggy Daze

A sweet, calm smile rests on my face,
But if you stare into my eyes,
Storm clouds billow and churn,
Tears glaze like rainy day skies.

I haven't seen the sun
Since I don't know when,
A misty gray shroud
Blocks and clouds my vision.

My life's been taken over
By a sadistic grandfather clock.
Time haunts and taunts me,
There's no way to keep up.

But if you ask me how I've been,
Invariably I'll look up and grin;
For what more is there to say
Besides, "Oh, I'm OK."

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trocka7 commented on Foggy Daze

06-16-2009

Are you really only 13?! Wow, evokes a lot of feeling, very well written....I can identify with you, and certainly could when I was 13. Thanks for sharing this

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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