Flightless Bird.

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I wrote this poem for Freddie Mercury....i tried to set it from his point of view....

Flightless Bird.

I feel my strength ebb away
knowing that soon all will end
i am well aware that night is closing in
so now my sightless eyes look for a friend

Pray to God, with this pain i will cope
agony grips when i smile at your kind word
for the cold creeps in beneath my skin
as here i lay prisoner...a Flightless Bird

I remember i used to walk..how i used to run
but fatigue now clouds my brow
i cry when thinking of those days now passed
i know to lifes closing curtains i must soon bow

Pain pervents me from holding you any longer
so you play me music..softly by my side
i sing you songs only you could understand
they come from deep within a heart that is open wide

When i'm gone, i beg you never cry
please don't treat my passing with regret
knowing that you could do so upsets me
i'll be free of this pain, i'll be happy..so never fret...

 

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LovingJesus commented on Flightless Bird.

06-27-2010

I really like how you set a dark and sad mood throughout the poem only to be lightened by the last line. Great write!

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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