Father

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Father

When what we traded
Were angry words,
And silent stares,
When we each healed our own wounds
With the salve of our pride
That kept us from admitting our need
One for the other,
Kept us from saying,
I love you-
Please, accept me and love me in return-

In those times and years now gone,
The emptiness we chose was not
Unacceptance of each other,
It was unacceptance of ourselves;
You for you, and me for me,
That kept us from embracing each other,
That kept us standing apart,
Defenses up,
Sparring with our hurt.

When all we ever really wanted
Was to say, "I love you."

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icu2 commented on Father

10-17-2009

Oh, how very true. This is a great poem with deep insight. Hurry and write some more my friend....and come read my first chapter of my book...tell me what you think. Have a great day!

mn514

10/18/2009

Thanks so much for your positive remarks! I look forward to reading your writing and will let you know as soon as I can. Hope you have had a great day, too. Thanks for adding something good to mine.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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