F.A.K.E.

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  • Lost Love

    F.A.K.E.
    FAKE IT WAS ALL FALSE
    IT WAS ALL PRETEND
    WAS ALL A LIE

    Where are you?
    your all around me,
    but i cant find you
    i cant enjoy your once sweet embrace


    I MISS YOU SO MUCH
    EVEN AFTER THE PAIN
    EVEN AFTER THE TEARS
    WHY DID U DO THIS TO ME

    what are you?
    you are a thief
    you are are a murderer
    you stole my heart and killed my soul


    LOVE, YOU LIER
    "NO ONE WILL GET HURT"
    I AM HURT AND YOU DONT CARE
    LOVE YOU ARE A LIER.
    LOVE, NO LONGER DO YOU EXIST,
    NO LONGER ARE YOU MY STRENGH

    for love,
    YOU WERE FAKE

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    snowdove commented on F.A.K.E.

    05-30-2009

    wow, my feelings exactly. god work for a young person..lol. nice job, i really enjoyed that i feel the very same. thank you for sharing
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    Superman

    05/30/2009

    no thank you for commenting plz read my next one it was inspiered by you

    Alanabomination commented on F.A.K.E.

    05-30-2009

    i dig it supper not bad keep writing dude you got potential trust me hon that talent and let it consume you immerse yourself in your writing let it become you thats all i can think to say
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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