Failure or Success

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    Failure or Success

    Failure or Success


    I started my day off wonderful
    With fasting and prayer
    But it wasn’t long before
    I sensed failure in the air

    My prayer turned into crying
    Fasting gave way to food
    And the cleaning I was planning
    I just wasn’t in the mood

    I felt like a total failure
    And I told this to my Lord
    I said how could you still love me
    When I’ve surely dropped my sword

    He brought to my remembrance
    A song for little children
    Yes, Jesus loves me
    Was the title I was given

    I began to sing this tune
    Then the tears began to flow
    I knew the Lord was telling me
    I love you more than you know

    I love you when you succeed
    I love you when you fail
    I love you on the mountain
    I love you in the dell

    So no matter how good
    No matter how bad
    The Lord still loves you
    After all He is still your dad

    By,
    Denise Jeter


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    PRober commented on Failure or Success

    07-19-2009

    very inspirational indeed....good rhyming and rhythm too!

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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