dahlusion commented on Fade

07-10-2010

Only those who love with relentless passion can compose a poem of this essence, of this fearless expression: "take me now before i disappear"—your voice is full of soul, with the wholesome odor of wanting to be taken, as a cloud is by the wind: "..have tumbled against sorrow -because i know this moment must end"—poetic brilliant! Bravo!!!

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SavVySam commented on Fade

04-20-2010

Very nicely done, So true, so true... we are all just passing through, and must dance, love, and laugh while we can...;)

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knight4696 commented on Fade

04-20-2010

SecretKiss - Very Nice Debut!! :) I love the cadence of this poem. The imagery is nicely conveyed and it's flow is superb. Very nice! :) Ken

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soulwriter commented on Fade

04-19-2010

Your words fade perfectly - for someone worried about blending into the world of poetry, I see your written strength exposed in a light of expression that is bright and purely poetic. "not because i have tumbled against sorrow" .... take me before I disappear". 10 - an instant favorite

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DavidRayy commented on Fade

04-19-2010

VERY nice. I am a "typical" rhymer, but some of my favs are just like that!! keep 'em coming. You'll do just fine on this site. You ARE a poet and thats all it takes.

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