Everlasting

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  • Love

    Everlasting

    My heart races in anticipation
    with a sweet precise articulation
    every moment slows in waiting
    for this everlasting love

    You will know when you see it
    feel it, touch it, smell it, hear it
    For its presence is amazing
    one you simply can't ignore

    Everlasting! there's no question
    in its meaning we can rest in
    and its soothing, freeing, fragrance
    causes us to become more

    I can't breath! This feeling smothers
    while I try my hope in others
    Is it worth it? My mind wonders...
    this everlasting love?

    Absolutely! Try its patience
    as you sway in and out
    up and down, side to side
    swirling through as you collide
    Its still there never fleeting
    for its everlasting love!

    We should take it free embrace it!
    Throughout life do not replace it.
    Its comfort will sustain you
    Most everlasting love!
    His everlasting love!

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    Elke commented on Everlasting

    07-01-2009

    I'm enthusiastic about your talent. You took me through the whole gambit of the feeling,..I wish I felt hat way.

    keithrberryjr commented on Everlasting

    01-10-2009

    Very nice.keep up the good work

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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