Endless Time

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    Endless Time

    Been endless time,since they took you away in shackles and chains. Been over a year, since i last saw your face. Was about the time, they laid someone very dear to us to rest. This life has left us, yet so depressed.
    Been endless time, since we experienced happiness. Even though, we dream of the good times we miss. It seems so painful when we reminiss, our hearts are so heavy at times like this.

    It will be endless time, until you come home, i will try to wait patiently, no matter how long. My heart hurts fiercely, as i wait. Oops, there goes another teardrop down my face.

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    CongoNetherland commented on Endless Time

    07-01-2009

    This brought a tear to me, and I am a prick right now leaving cruel posts. Well done. Clear up the spelling and grammar probs. Those are easy targets.

    lilshorty44

    07/04/2009

    thank you so much for commenting on my poem (endless time) it is actually the only comment i have received yet on any of my poems! i deeply appreciate it, because a lot of heart goes into my poems. sherry

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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