Emerald Fields

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Writing is Art! In this poem, I personally claim it as my personal favorite. Not only is it a poem that makes much sense, but it contrasts itself into the realm of art by painting a picture for the reader and spiritually in the sense of creation.

Emerald Fields



I stare at an empty canvas in front of me..


Imagining the greenest of fields
reaching way up high
gracefully fondling, caressing,
teasing a velveteen sky.


I take hold of the brush calling my name..

I begin by painting a sun
to illuminate the lands.
Highlights to portray vitality
smoldering in my hands.


I clean the brush while pondering colors..

I cast upon the canvas
birds sailing abroad,
soaring, flying high. Free!
Then, a treeline unflawed.


In time, this masterpiece will need a frame..

But first, I must paint a
woman, salvation yields,
groveling the mercy of Heaven.
Then, I shall call it, "Emerald Fields!"

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GentleT commented on Emerald Fields

07-24-2010

When we look at the magnificent beauty of creation one should believe in a creator. May you find your green fields.

Qualin commented on Emerald Fields

07-19-2010

yea what you said...I couldn't have said it better...but I'll try you are going to be a favorite your style is very different and very unique...a 10 for me...Qualin

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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