Dude

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Dude

dude you rock my world
 only if you could see my pain
 hangin' with that girl
 it messes with me that you choose her not me
 never me
 what is wrong?
 love is stong in me
 but not in you i see
 but that won't stop me i've fought and i'm still going
 she won't win
 never
 ever
 i love you it's true
 i miss you already
 i don't see why your with her
 she ain't no hottie
 she ain't even your type
 if you say no to my question
 must mean you ain't good
 shouldn't hang around a rejector

 to Nico

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wolfinlove commented on Dude

11-26-2009

True expression of emotion. Straight from the heart. Your heart led your hands in this poem, not your head. Kudos.

sk8ergirl commented on Dude

11-25-2009

i like the poem i could feel the emotion. it really speaks to me even though i haven't gone through it. great write.

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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