Dreamsing

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Dreamsing

The words you could not sing slow enough
Drifted up through the cracks
I heard the voice from another room
And took pleasure in picturing your face
in my mind

The features I did not know
Filled quickly in with imagination
To match the fervent glow
of your peculiar timbre

So I began to wander
Room to room in search of you
But with hesitance I move
Fearing the you I built to be
too much a fictional view


Fear like the dream I wake to find
Has been nothing more than a beautiful lie 

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Chaos128 commented on Dreamsing

09-21-2010

I decided to check out a 2nd example of your work to see if the first one I saw was a fluke. It wasn't... Your work is exquisitely real.

CaelTaylor

10/13/2010

Thank you so much. I think that is one of the best complements to get, making writing seem real to others. I usually have a hard time relating the mood to my audience. I am so glad you enjoyed this.

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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