Dreams

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Dreams

Every night, I lie in bed, and wait to sleep.
And every night, sleep isn't the only thing to overcome me.
As I'm pulled down into the darkest hour,
I lay there. Unmoving.
But then I awaken in a room, dimly lit by hidden light.
I find my friends, and my little girl.
Walking over, I spot something.
Quick-moving and unseen..
I glance over, but ignore it. Continuing to walk.
Then it happens. I'm hit.
Sharp pain roles down from my neck to my lower back.
As I try to awake in my own bed, I'm pulled back under,
And drowned in darkness. Another sharp pain.
I try to surface. To make it out okay.
But I can't.
I get pulled down again and again.
Finally, after a big struggle, I surface.
Awakened in my room, soft drops of water rolling down my face.
I dry my tears, knowing it's just a dream, and lie back down.
Waiting to be pulled back under, covered in darkness..

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JazzyBaby commented on Dreams

01-17-2011

It's a pretty poem hun. I likes it, although it's rather depressing for your typical poem style.

BabyAngel

01/19/2011

I know it seems depressing.. I agree. It actually was something I wrote based on events that were happening to me at the time,

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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