Downwards
Downwards I fall,Oh wind in my hair,
Wishing Gods call,
No time for despair,
Wanting salvation,
Angels all around,
Ready for heaven,
Death comes to town,
So downwards I fall.
Downwards
3 Comments
Tags: Inner Self
Poem Commentary
Downwards is a Acrostic poem. This type of writting is fun to do.Oh wind in my hair,
Wishing Gods call,
No time for despair,
Wanting salvation,
Angels all around,
Ready for heaven,
Death comes to town,
So downwards I fall.
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Poem Comments
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Tempestlady commented on Downwards
06-12-2011
- What goes up must come down. Hopefully not too far down. Nice work and loved the rhyme. Write on handsome.............Tlady
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koolmom0 commented on Downwards
05-22-2011
- Hey this is an awesome write, don't fall too far though LOL. :)
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05/23/2011
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AlisRed commented on Downwards
03-27-2011
- I absolutely adored your rhyme pattern! Also your opposite objectives were quite intriguing.
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03/28/2011
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