Do You Know?

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Do You Know?

Do you know that I love you?, and do you know?, I know too, you've fallen short, and you can't go back, but I want you to know, I love you, always will, cause your my brother, your always my friend. You think a lot of your past pain, things you've done, you can't change, and your so sorry, but your 'doing right' today. but still you find, loves not 'there', in people who, all claim to care, when they find out, their love blows away. Yet 'He' the man who knew no sin, loves me now and even when, I was lost and did not care, still 'He' did not turn from me, the warmth of his love helped me change, so I'll help you, do you know. I hope you know, do you know?, I love you, always will, cause your my brother, your always my friend.

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MrGee commented on Do You Know?

09-09-2009

A wonderful tribute to the Lord. The work paints a good picture for the reader and has a nice rhytmn. Good Work

mmichelle97219 commented on Do You Know?

02-16-2009

Not poetry. A good monologue, but definitly not poetry.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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