Distressed

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    Distressed
    I'm liquid flowing freely

    Falling faster fire fight

    Touching tingly taunted

    Bringing shadows from the light

    I'm wind warm and wondering

    Blowing breezes butterflies

    Whispered words work wonders

    Mental miracles in mind

    She's stone steel and stubborn

    Stricken soft in sweet success

    Driven down discomfert

    Disguised in eyes

    Distressed

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    ginga commented on Distressed

    07-26-2009

    Dissonant, I like your alliteration very much. I have poems written in this style as well. (Tidal Shift & Onslaught). I also love that there is a "he" and "she" character seemingly at odds with one another. Interesting concept. ginga
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

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