Did He Feel It Too?

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    Did He Feel It Too?

    He was soft and gentle at first.
    Not knowing what to do with his lust.
    I couldn't take my eyes off of his.
    He looked at me so tenderly.
    I wanted to be one with him.
    Then he became more rough.
    I felt like I should scream.
    Not knowing how to act.
    I closed my eyes.
    I waited for it to be over.
    It didn't take long.
    He could tell that I was scared.
    Did he know that he hurt me?
    Did he even care?
    I want to feel again.
    To feel that first feeling.
    The love, the lust.
    Alas I felt nothing.

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    Chrisjan commented on Did He Feel It Too?

    05-28-2009

    That was a very descriptive scene, that you captured on to paper, "quite well". Thank you for sharing !

    bforibus commented on Did He Feel It Too?

    05-28-2009

    wow. that was a terrible experience it sounds like. i do wish it had more of a song to this pain. either way very good write and thought.

    4everboom commented on Did He Feel It Too?

    05-28-2009

    I so sorry, I felt what you went throu in this piece I hope that this was not from personal experiences. very good imagery

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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