Diary Entrys: Diary Entry #3

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    Diary Entrys: Diary Entry #3

    Dear Diary,

    As I sit and look at him

    I can see the lies

    The truth won’t ever be told I can see it in his eyes

    So instead of one word of truth

    He opens his mouth

    And what comes out just can’t be the truth

    I loved her but she left she didn’t want none of you

    So she blamed it all on you

    The first born out of three

    The one that ruined her life

    The one that made her leave

    The one that caused her pain

    I listen but can’t really hear

    As he says that she died when running away from it all

    ©2009 Alyssa Willis

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    FatalDesire commented on Diary Entrys: Diary Entry #3

    06-28-2009

    Good poem, I like your style, keep up the good work!
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    midnightchase commented on Diary Entrys: Diary Entry #3

    06-03-2009

    Nicely written. I can feel strong emotions in the words as I read. Perhaps within the mind and within the heart, truth shall always be seen. Lies only survive on the surface and only as long as one chooses to allow them to survive. Awesome writing job.
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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