Deep blue

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    Deep blue

    When I saunter along your sandy surroundings

    And I see the seagull flying
    gracefully safe over your extensive surface
    cutting capers in the wind
    The wind formed by the power of your seethe
    meeting me half way in a tender touch

    And I hear the laughter of people playing
    running to meet your waves
    Your waves that playfully cover them
    just for a while….a little while…
    and then release again

    And I see the fishermen sailing out in a pleasant mood
    expectantly moving to the horizon...

    And I hear the whisper of the wind…
    Melting together with the sound of your waves…

    Your waters that we need
    Your waters that keep us alive!

    I cannot imagine
    the danger that is hidden behind
    I cannot fear
    the darkness of your depth
    that ruthlessly swallows everything
    Every soul that crosses your path
    in unfortunate coincidences.
    Again and again
    At all time

    These souls…
    I don’t hear their laughter
    Neither do I see their movements
    no more
    Far away is their existence.
    laid up in your seabed
    covered by your waters
    and steadily cherished by your embrace
    our beloved souls
    Only their memories
    live on

    Deep blue…
    If you could speak…you should’ve warned them
    If you had arms… you should’ve laid them ashore
    If you had legs …you should’ve replaced yourself
    If you had a mind …you should’ve considered

    …I suppose

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    raychile commented on Deep blue

    06-07-2009

    Very nice imagery. I feel for the pour souls taken by the ocean, but the beauty live on. Super job.

    loraine

    06/10/2009

    You are Right Raychile. I feel so sorry for the pour souls. But indeed the beauty lives on. To me the ocean willbe always something frightening. But still I am enjoyig it from a distance!! Thanks for your comment!

    sherry122 commented on Deep blue

    06-01-2009

    Very beautifully written, it was as if I was experiencing the invironment that you described. Nice work!

    loraine

    06/10/2009

    Thank you! It gives me such a good feeling when reading your comment

    Bwyn commented on Deep blue

    01-23-2009

    I can see the ocean.

    loraine

    06/10/2009

    hey Bwyn, I thank you for your comment. It is very much appreciated!

    Phoenix9 commented on Deep blue

    01-17-2009

    very nice read

    loraine

    06/10/2009

    Thank you. I apppreciate your comment.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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