Deception

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  • Lost Love

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    This was written when abandoned and found Love i thought was real was a sham.   It is just my thoughts and how I saw them. I was hurt and took a while to  begin again. Still havent really but starting to.

    Deception

    A laugh, a smile, that special look
    as happiness envelops you
    in its warm embrace.

    A soft murmur of a future
    that excites,
    happenings that can ignite.

    Yet all while as the
    murmurings continue to stir-
    a blaze begins to slowly burn.

    Not a blaze of heat
    and warmth - but a fire
    consuming and destructive.

    It devours, burns slowly from within
    possessive and alluring in one,
    promising all but giving nothing.

    We see it, feel it and draw back
    but cannot destroy it.
    It is devouring all - it moves on.

    It is not love, it is not caring.
    Its warmth has icy fingers
    Its breath foul acrid air.

    It is not luck that saves one.
    It is a light that shines from within ones self
    A warming light, not a blaze, it is life.

    And you are Deception

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    bforibus commented on Deception

    06-17-2009

    thats hot. sounds like the love of a scorpio. this wasnt anger at all. it was extremely expressive. very emotional. sad. but also a realization. and lessons learned our the best medicine to a broken heart. great write. the way the colors mixed and the metaphors danced. it made hurt beautiful.

    Gabrielle

    06/17/2009

    Wow. Thank you so much. I did not know whether to continue writing or not but I will now. I have nearly 50 all written since January. I love putting pen to paper.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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