Deceiving love charmer.

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Deceiving love charmer.

You promised, you promised
You said you'd never leave
Right then when you said it I knew you where lying through your teeth
I felt so hurt, so worthless
To tell you honestly
But now I know it's stupid to believe that this made me

The words you said that come out of your mouth
Made it sound like you had it all figured out
The lies that you told me
I know that your sorry
Yes my love I can see past my hatred and furry 

Please take this forgiveness
Leave with persrverance 
And for your own good help yourself and
Just metaphoricaly whipe away this
Forget me, Discard me
Tell your heart to stop beating over me
Bleed out my love that still blinds your eyes to see.

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SammyBoo21 commented on Deceiving love charmer.

07-26-2010

WOW!!!! That is very beautiful. Honey...keep going. Ur a great writer.

ShadowStealer commented on Deceiving love charmer.

07-26-2010

I love how this poem shows forgivness in the hatred. =-) Keep writing! ShadowStealer

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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