day dreamin

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    day dreamin

    i was daydreamin and im thinkin of u......day dreamin
    and im thinkin bout you,lonly nights come, days of
    melody tune like some summer fun, run to far away
    places where just friends arethe basics, no
    complicated ways feeling like life just runs on and
    where memorys could never be wasted,but i see life
    different and ive come to face it,your life is on
    track B,whats left is to see ,ill smile atyou
    wondering always so curiously what and how life will
    turn out and whats ment to be.......

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    lilvicki commented on day dreamin

    01-26-2010

    Short but nice, not complicated..........like it!!

    Iridesse commented on day dreamin

    10-12-2009

    I Like it! Kinda reminds me of a rap song! Really nice!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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