Darkness

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    Darkness
    This pain is killing me
    felling the darkness falling over me
    you leaving me to die...
    i take my last few breathes
    my life flashes before my eyes
    all the happy and depressing times
    thoughts of you run through my head...
    clouding out other thoughts
    I weep... try get up but can't
    I see the knife you stuck in my heart
    my cold blood all around me
    I will never have the chance to tell
    you I love you
    I take my last breathe
    and then I falter.

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    mamasan commented on Darkness

    12-05-2009

    great wordery and I am not sure of the music even though I read it three times. Is it the sadness of breaking up or perhaps a new growth and need to change some things. I hear the music now and it is haunting and challenging my thoughts..........ty
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    drewking commented on Darkness

    12-28-2008

    good piece of work...
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    Terra commented on Darkness

    11-25-2008

    wow...it's been a while since I've read a poem like that one... I used to write like that too.
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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