Crying

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    This was written on my husband and I's 3 year annivarsary when we were seperated. Now we are happily married and have a wonderful daughter.

    Crying

     I'm crying on thje inside
    And I want it to stop
    I know why
    But I want it to stop

    There is only one reason
    And one reason only
    On why I'm feeling
    The way I am

    I'm starting to miss him
    And I don't want to think about him
    I just want everything to stop
    To stop playing with my mind

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    alreedus commented on Crying

    12-01-2010

    It is ok to cry on the outside, Sweetheart. That takes the pressure off the butterlies in your heart that look for cover from the falling drops. - Alan
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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