confused

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    confused

                          i'm confused 
                         are we together 
                         or not i don't know
                         do we belong together 
                         or not i can't belive thet you think   
                         my love is writen in the sand
                         for the waters to wash away but really
                         it is  writen in may heart to stay but 
                         aways know were evey you go i love you 

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    Teardrops commented on confused

    11-27-2010

    This is really beautiful and i love the way its written and the context thanks for a wonderful read Marie
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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