citric acid

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    citric acid

    a soul in torsion
    a spirit squeezed like lemons
    filtered dreams remain.

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    lightcourier commented on citric acid

    03-24-2009

    You really do well with the haiku. fun to read again and again....as haiku should be read. Thanks.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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