CHANGE

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CHANGE

                        Today I am a new person, why? Because of change.Today I am a new person, why? Because of a move.Today I am a new person, why? Because of people.Today I am a new person, why? because of GOD.  Change is bette,r than no change at all.          CHANGE!!!!!!!!!!

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RStornes commented on CHANGE

10-26-2009

This is short and sweet also to the point, with the exception of the misspelled word, I do enjoy reading it. We can all use some changes in our lives. With God as our source he can help us to do it.

Robby

10/27/2009

thank you ever so much. i will work o the missed spelled words.

dumplin commented on CHANGE

10-23-2009

Once again, very short. Also very repetitive. There are many misspellings in this. I'm sorry, I can't rate this one until you revise it.

icu2 commented on CHANGE

10-20-2009

A rolling stone gathers no moss!.....Just what does that mean anyway? I like this poem! Looking forward to more Robby, keep them coming......................TEN!

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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