Change!

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    Change!

                 Another night alone wondering where in life i went wrong
               Giving what i felt,my all,and even more then what i should
                 Still somehow,someway i find myself here for too long
               Thinking how i can make a change,in me,if possible i could
                 The feeling of sharing a dark room,alone,doesn't appeal
               Empty silience echos around me as if in a huge void space
                 Reminding me of how loneliness can be pain and too real
               Lifting my head whipping away tears memories i can't errace
                Getting sleepy now..tomorrow will be another day to change
               All that has befall me,some is mine,but most is what you did
                I have to give life another chance my mind has to rearrange
               Close my eye's,fighting sleep,i lost,as i'm closing my eye lids!

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    blueink13 commented on Change!

    05-29-2009

    Nice, and a little sad. My heart kind of broke al little reading this. "All that has befall me, some is mine, but most is what you did"...Painful, and beautiful.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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