Change The World

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    Change The World

    How to change the world?  First: Stop thinking about yourselves, cause life is short, and seeing a smile on a persons face that you helped would make you want that feeling over and over.
    Second: Stop being selfish, cause all that does is make your life a lonely one.  And no one should die alone!  Even if they choose to cause a good friend is forever.
    Third:  Share! (And what I mean is share.)Share everything cause a man cannot live without bread alone. He/she will thank you and bless you. Plus it makes you feel good.(If no one knows this.) If a person helps someone it starts a chain reaction, and they will make the next person happy, and then it starts.  People forget about their problems and life for about 8 to 10 secs.  But their mind,body,and soul are free to think about others.
    Last:  Kill people with kindness! cause violence on violence only causes death, and we already have enough.  Why kill when you can share.

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    cryptic77 commented on Change The World

    06-24-2009

    I understand what you are saying and I wish that the world was like this but this can't be done on a regular bases

    Paolo commented on Change The World

    06-24-2009

    I frequently drive to work and on the way there is a refugee man who holds a sign up advertising a coffee shop. This happens rain or shine. I noticed that he looked miserable so one day I began to wave at him and since I began to do this his face always has a smile on it. A little gesture like a wave can make a difference in someones life. This work comes across as a philosophical statement, one I agree with. Yet how do you write this to make it poetry? In it's current form I am unable to grasp that it is poetry.

    frazier14

    06/24/2009

    thank you. this comment made me very happy. And thank you for waving at the man i think you changed his life

    Chi commented on Change The World

    06-24-2009

    Good concept and excellent subject matter..............I rated this poem a 75 . and I look forward to reading more of your poem styles. sister in poetry.Chi.

    frazier14

    06/24/2009

    thank you

    mspoet1 commented on Change The World

    06-24-2009

    To me, it seems more like an inspirational message than a poem. But I have to agree with you on all counts. Good job in relaying a good message.

    frazier14

    06/24/2009

    thank you

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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