Bursting

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    Bursting

    Same old day  never a change
    some people like it
    i guess i do.
    life is to long of a range

    We are best after death
    no one to bother us
    no food to eat
    no breath

    I have had a hard life,
    my heart feels like it will burst,
    of all things,
    living is the worst.

    Never seen much in a woman,
    dont have one with me.
    since there was liz,
    you know she set me free.

    There is nothing to help it,
    ill die here alone i am sure.
    just feels right ,
    don't want a cure.

    I stand in line
    and look over the hills
    don't need more freedom
    dont like their pills

    just an old  country boy
    who went to kill the yellow man
    i didn't want to
    it wasnt my plan

     

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    am2anangel commented on Bursting

    02-26-2010

    well, I really liked it great flow and rhyme. sure is sad however with just a glimpse of hope. well done. I hope you find something in your life to bring you joy before the end.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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