Bubble

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    Bubble

    You may have a favourite car, colour, film or bird,
    But do you have, a favourite word ?.

    I've chosen one, why don't you.
    Seriously, its not a joke, its very very true,

    Many of you might think, this is alittle strange,
    Or I'm not all there, and abit derranged.

    If you think about it, you're spoilt for choice,
    As it could be in another language, accent or a different voice.

    How about a name of someome precious to you,
    Or just slang for a word that its been shortened to.

    It could be funny, sad, or meaningful,
    Really interesting or even quite dull.

    Don't forget this is your opinion though,
    So let your mind wonder and give it a go.

    Now the one I recently chose as my favourite, is the word Bubble,
    Wait a minute, I think when I was young I chose another, oh now I'm in trouble.

    It was Metamorphosis, now what am I going to do,
    As I think both of them are good, how do I split the two

    Lets look at the meanings and sounds and try and come to a decision,
    Putting them either 1st place or 2nd and finalise their position.

    We know a bubble is a thin ball of liquid enclosing gas or air,
    And Metamorphosis is the change of form or character.

    Come to think of it they are both interlinked in a way
    So, I can't get rid of one and let the other one stay.

    Metamorphosis sounds interesting and Bubble sounds fun,
    I'm afraid I'm not going to get anywhere so I think thats me done

    I've decided they are now both my favourites, and win the top prize,
    Who knows, with so many words out there, another one may arise.

     

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    grimspoetry commented on Bubble

    10-12-2010

    i love the way that you question the use of language in here, and btw my favourite word is apathy :D

    vickijane commented on Bubble

    09-27-2010

    love the rhyming lol I like the word bubble too as well as metamorphosis lol again clever

    Crush commented on Bubble

    09-27-2010

    truly clever and entertaining. not an easy poem to write but somehow you hace achieved it gracefully.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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