Broken Heart

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    Broken Heart

    Working so hard to rise above
    Trying to please my wonderful love
    Even though i tried and tried
    Things didnt work out jus fine
    I knew my love wasnt going to stay
    So i finally let it slip away
    Crying so hard 4 the love of my heart
    It felt like our souls were torn apart
    I'll never forget how my love ran away
    Making me sad thru the month of may
    By losing the love that was about to start
    I was alone with a broken heart

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    Papa commented on Broken Heart

    05-28-2010

    Love can be wonderful, but it so often hurts. Love should be a gift, not something you have to sell your soul for. I know it's been said, there are a lot more fish in the sea. It's true. Just be carefull where you cast your line. Some fish aren't worth keeping. They make look pretty to begin with, but some rot when they're out of water. The smell can be awful
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    Kiri commented on Broken Heart

    05-19-2009

    that's really good. i know what you mean it's really hard to let go of someone. i have to let go of someone right now but it's hard too.
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    Adara commented on Broken Heart

    05-19-2009

    I really like this poem lonely it is very emotional and i feel like i can def connect with it in my inner soul.
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    Lonely

    06/24/2009

    wow thankx

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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