briquetts

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    briquetts

     Upon my pc chair i sit
    with fingers poised to type a bit

    It seems I think of nothing yet
    so theres nothing yet to regret

    The longer i think of what to write
    remembering i had the same thoughts last nite.

    Still positive  yet I think,
    maybe after I take a drink.

    As wandering my mind takes flight
    I'll add some more tomorrow nite.

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    bforibus commented on briquetts

    07-11-2009

    i like the lazy type of feel i get ffrom the poem's topic and somewhat of the flow. just a calm ordinary situation that you could either do or leave at any point. i'm trying to get the title and poem similarities but i can t but very good write
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    alphavoiceovers

    07/12/2009

    Thank you for your time and intuitive comments.

    alphavoiceovers

    04/05/2010

    The title briquetts was the reason for writing the poem and he couldn´t get over his block to write it.

    Minerva22 commented on briquetts

    07-08-2009

    This is a cute poem, the dreaded 'writer's block. The poem is light and thoughtful, and very easy to understand. I like it.
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    alphavoiceovers

    07/08/2009

    Thank you for the great comment.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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