Breath by Breath

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    Breath by Breath

    I thought I saw you the other day,
    Your hands still clinched in that fist I know too well.
    I thought I saw those evil eyes,
    The ones that burned me as you cut me with your rage.
    I loved you and you slowly killed me,
    Piece by piece I disappeared.
    Inch by inch my body broke.
    Your never ending grasp digging deeper and deeper.
    I survived by faith.
    But the other day I thought I saw you.
    Anyday I may still see you,
    I continue to live breath by breath.

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    lonewolf commented on Breath by Breath

    04-29-2009

    well written poem, i hope youre ok

    Candytina commented on Breath by Breath

    04-28-2009

    this is a very beautiful poem i like it very much

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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