Breakout

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An associate, going through some personal srife, started a new training progam at work.  After the 2 day session she was very motivated and driven and i jotted this down within a few hours after I saw her after the training ended.  I guess it went well for her!

Breakout

Breakout

 

Energy flows, eyes bright

You have learned and

it treats you well. Your

swelling in happiness.

 

 

Today, a long time coming

a new beginning, a new plan. The outlook

is bright. Future more clear.

 

What you want is what you receive

Structure makes you strong

Your eyes show fire, desire for

The challenge.

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Artie commented on Breakout

08-21-2009

Sounds like the first steps of a new journey. Hopefully it will lead to success.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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