born in the darkness

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    born in the darkness

    i was born in the darkness.
    with only claws and fangs to defend my self.
    i travl the path with only a sword on my back.
    i return to this one place again and again.
    is it becuse of this girl.
    i fight off the darkness.
    even though i'm hurt.
    she holds me close.
    and i know everythings going to be ok.
    i smile even in the darkest of moments.

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    ceceila commented on born in the darkness

    12-16-2009

    wow why so deep huh is there something wrong with life also i tried calling but there is something with your phone whats with that nd i gave u my number call me once gosh u say im ur angel but u treat me like a stranger wats wrong did i do something that made u stop talking to me or somehting like that if so then tell me so i wont offend you again.
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    Paolo commented on born in the darkness

    06-01-2009

    This poem has the essence of a great piece and with a little, I do mean little editing would be that great poem.
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    ladynight commented on born in the darkness

    05-27-2009

    i liked it. it's like you left a part of yourself in your poem. it's dark but there's a light at the end of the tunnel so to speak.
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    mistyparish commented on born in the darkness

    05-15-2009

    That was short and sweet, I liked it. 10 here.
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    jmylez commented on born in the darkness

    05-13-2009

    good job man
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    thedarkpoet

    02/25/2010

    thanks guys ^_^

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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