Bloody Suicide

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Bloody Suicide

A cold dark force of PAIN devours,
His soul, his life, his final hours.
Death awaits at the end he knows,
But this strange understanding; Nowhere to go.
Hiding beneath stars, a cold dark void.
The existence of nothing-- abandoned little boy.
Crying for assistance. No one hears.
Too busy to notice the cold dark tears.
Awaiting a spark of light in his life,
he hides his PAIN, with the beauty of a knife.
Crying, Writing, Screaming, he tears,
Open his heart, if only someone was there.
A bright white room, enclosed all around,
he lies in the center of the cold dark ground.
Heaven or Hell? It seems simple to decide.
But what is the outcome, A BLOODY SUICIDE??

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Gracey commented on Bloody Suicide

07-15-2009

I liked this a lot. I thought the ending was powerful but my favourite like was "Awaiting a spark of light in his life, he hides his PAIN, with the beauty of a knife."

bforibus commented on Bloody Suicide

01-23-2009

definitely loved the reds and blacks in this picture. very good read

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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