Blind

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    Blind
    My life has lost sight
    My eyes must be blind
    Cause something ain't right
    I've been really kind.

    But you must be out of your mind
    Because my eyes must be blind
    I've strayed from my way
    somethings i just can't say

    But I have been really kind
    Because my eyes must be blind
    I've fallen so far
    I no longer know where you are

    I must be out of my mind cause
    Because my eyes must be blind
    This angel has gone so far
    Because I dont know who I are.

    I've gone so far
    My eyes must be blind
    Because I've fallen so far
    I just fell so far.

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    Hanna commented on Blind

    06-26-2009

    I enjoyed this poem. The words have so many implied meanings related to loss or losing one's way without the benefit of understanding why.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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