Bear in my backyard!

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    Bear in my backyard!

    There's a bear in my backyard, I swear,
    There really is a bear.
    He's in our swimming pool,
    his mouth is full of drool.
    He's probaly thinking to eat,
    he's a carnivore, he eats meat!
    I hope we will be safe right here,
    because we're nowhere near.

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    Hampton commented on Bear in my backyard!

    07-14-2009

    A cute rendition of a scary sight if one could ever imagine one.

    GentleT commented on Bear in my backyard!

    07-01-2009

    If this is true, your parents should call animal control or the forestry department and report it. Don't blame you for being upset. And it is wise to stay away from wild animals even when they look harmless. Your rhyming is wonderful in your poem though. Keep up the good work.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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