Back 2 Darkness

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  • Sadness
    • Santeeboi
    • is so hurt--- tryin' to look on the bright side!!!!

    Back 2 Darkness

    Back to the rain
    I'm feeling the pain
    The scars of love
    The hot, red blood
    Broken heart because of lies
    The tears i cry
    In the darkness of my corner
    My only escape id death
    Where do i belong
    and who do i long
    [For] I am alwayszx misunderstood
    So alone is where i should
    [Be] for now and forever
    Thought,but I'm not a treasure
    Alwayszx pain, & never pleasure[tearszx][tearszx]&[more tearszx]

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    dahlusion commented on Back 2 Darkness

    02-18-2009

    Heartfelt & powerful. Go inward my young brother, this is where the "treasure" lies waiting for you to discover your power.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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